I do sort of agree with darklion in that this 'simple messages' thing is a little overrated. Beautiful, but overrated. EXCEPT...
Except when you use Brand New lyrics. I don't know, maybe I'm being biased and kind of hypocritical when I say that, but I think that, if you had used any other band's lyrics in this photo, it wouldn't be the same.
HOWEVER, you didn't use another band's lyrics. You used Brand New. And the stark harshness and simplicity of the photo, juxtaposed against the passion and pain of the words...I don't know. It's kind of really flawless.
Oh My, I really love this picture! its my favorite song from Brand New, they're just amazing and all their lyrics are so important to me, its just as if they knew you and your problems.... It's just an amazing way to capture a phrase from Degausser without hearing it nor just reading it but actually watching it. I know it's just simple, but for me that phrase is important and being able to "picture it" makes it art!